A Valentine Horror (Short Story)


“Sigh, why does it have to rain today? My hair got all frizzy and my outfit is stuck to me making me look like a wet dog.”

“I quite like the rain, actually. It is poetic and sings a deep song. No need to worry about your hair and clothes, they wont last long once we get to my place.”

“I don't think I will ever understand your way of thinking when it comes to rain and dark clouds and night stuff. But I do like where you are going with the idea of your place. Can I get a hint of what to expect?”

“Oh, but that will only spoil the surprise. I wouldn't want to do that, it did take me some intricate planning you know.”

“I can't wait. I bet there will be wine, or champagne. I like champagne, mmm and chocolate. Melted chocolate for a special dessert. Haha! Oh Mr. Perfect, I like surprises.”

“Ahhhhh, please refrain from saying Mr. Perfect. My name is-”

“Sush! I don't want to know what your name is. I want to keep this a mystery.”

“Alright, and what shall I call you this evenning, miss...”

“You can call me Ms. Femme Fatale”

...Oh boy...

“It is downright pouring! I could never go out in that rain”

“How about I order another bottle of wine while we wait for it to slow down?”

“Sure! The red will warm me up from the inside, and then some”

“Waiter! Your finest red please!”

“Right away sir.”

“Back to you Femme Fatale, I want to know more about you.”

“What would you like to know?”

“I want to know what makes your eyes change from green to blue, how they got to be so beautiful. I want to know your deepest darkest thoughts, and I want to know what exactly makes your thighs quiver.”

“Keep talking like that and it wont be long before they do. It's starting to get a bit warm here, don't you think?”

“Your cheeks are definitely rosy. And look, the rain has slowed down. How about we finish our glasses and head out before it starts again.”

“Is it far, where you live?”

“It takes about 30 minutes to arrive. I truly hope you don't mind. We drive down a windy road, the sight is a blessing to see. Rows of trees tower over the road making it feel like we are in a magical place.”

“Sounds beautiful! And of course I don't mind, as long as I can get a ride back to town.”

“That wont be a problem at all.”

“Why are we slowing down?”

“I don't know! It's a full tank of gas and none of the warning lights have turned on. Let me pull over to the side to stay out of danger and I will have a look under the hood.”

“Weird, but sure.”

“The oil is ok, and the spark plugs seem fine. No signs of overheating and there's plenty of coolant. Could be the battery but the headlights were looking fine earlier and the wipers were moving perfectly fine, so definitely not the alternator. I'm not sure what it is.”

“I hope you have roadside assistance.”

“I have already called them. They will call me back once they find a towing in the area that is available to help us, so for now we just have to sit tight.”

“Well, that's a bummer. I was hoping for a better evening. This really cuts into our night.”

“It doesn't have to. Here, step out and I can show you a bit of a good time while we wait. The time will go by a lot faster this way.”

“I'm up for a thigh quivering time. Wanna see if you can make that happen?”

“Challenge accepted! Now get out so I can push you against car and run my hands all over your body.”

“Ok! I'm out, I'm out! MMM can you touch me right.... oh right there.”

“Your skin is so soft, it was definitely a good idea that you wore a skirt tonight. Let me just take a peek as to what you look like from behind. Turn around.”

“Do you like what you see- HEY! That is an expensive skirt you know! Hey, wait! Wait! I didn't say you could... OUCH! I think I want to wait in the car...”

“I'm sorry, I just got too carried away. I was too excited to see, and when I saw what you were wearing, I just had to. Come here, I truly am sorry. You are just, so tasty and so hard to resist. Let me make it up to you.”

“I'm not sure, I really didn't like that. I don't know if I can trust you.”

“I promise you, my touch will be so gentle, you will ask me to be more firm with you.”

“Ok... Wow, you can have a gentle touch.”

“Want me to keep going like that?”

“Please. I can just start to feel warmth in my cheeks again.”

“You are definitely getting warmer to my touch.”

“Oh, do that again.. just like that...yes, can you-can you...”

“Like this?”

“Mhm! Again. And a bit harder this time.”

“See, you can trust me.”

“How are you doing that? I've never been touched like this before.”

“It's my secret, and it's only just begun. Just tell me when you want it to get more intense.”

“Oh my. I'm liking this so much, but I'm curious what could be more than this.”

“Do you trust me now? If you trust me, I will show you what heaven looks like.”

“I-I trust you. Oh do it now!”

“My pleasure, now don't be surprised when I do ...this! MMM I like how you sound right now and careful not to bite your lip too hard.”

“I can't..oh my.. I can't”

“Oh yes you can. Do it now and I will make it more powerful”

“Ummm, mmmm ooo-eeecchhh AAACHHH! HRRRK! KKKKKK! CHRRRRK!”

“What the heck was tha-WHAT THE FUCK! WHAT THE FUCK! OH MY GOD! WHAT THE FUCK! GIRL! OH NO, HOLY SHIT, WHAT THE FUCK IS GOING ON? OH NO! THERE'S BLOOD ALL OVER! WHAT IN THE FUCK IS HAPPENING??”

“HRRKKKKK ECCHHHH KKKK”

“UH UH UH... EVERYTHING IS GOING TO BE OK. Um I'm calling an ambulance right now. Uh uh...uh...Hello! HELLO?! I'm with a girl on highway um... umm....fucking north of 96. My car broke down and I we were outside waiting and something happened. Something really BAD! I didn't see what it was. I looked up AND HER THROAT IS CUT OPEN. I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO! THERE IS BLOOD ALL OVER!
WHAT? YOU WANT ME TO DO WHAT? O-O-OOOK.. OMG THIS IS GROSS. I CAN FEEL HER TRYING TO SWALLOW AND BREATHE AT THE SAME TIME. DUDE HURRY UP! I DON'T THINK SHE'S GOI--
AAAAGHHH ACCHH AAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRK!! HELLL-HRRRRKKKKK
CH-CH HRRRKK-KK-KK-K hhhhhh....”

“Hello? Hello? Sir? Are you still there? Anyone? The ambulance and the police are on their way. Sir? Are you still with me? Hello???”

“There really is so much blood. You know, sister, it has been believed that bathing in blood gives rejuvenation to ones skin. Too bad you had to be out here with Brad. Otherwise I could have used your blood and that of my husbands to enjoy at home. Such a waste.”

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05.02.2020 01:22
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Foxy is back! I'm glad you didn't pick this scenario as one of your date options. ;) Nice to see you flexing those writing skills again.

05.02.2020 15:16
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Haha! Ya that would be bad.

I thought I would try a different approach to writing, where there is no narration, just he words being spoken of the characters, what they say sets the scene. In my mind I feel like it gives a bit of an edge as we can't aren't given that extra, kind of like not being able to see around the corner.

What do you think?

Feels good to be back for sure :D

06.02.2020 01:22
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Aaaand, she's BACK!!! Yay!

Oh, I loved this!! I did have a kinda dejavu to Janet and Brad. I loved what you did with this. Look forward to more...

06.02.2020 07:34
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Woot woot! I'm so happy you liked it! I was worried this style wouldn't work out so good. Not sure who Janet and Brad are though. As soon as I spark up a new idea, I'll sending out more ^_^

Thank you so much for reading and your support <3

06.02.2020 14:51
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I did.

You don't know who Brad and Janet are? You don't know about the Rocky Horror Picture show? Then you have to find it and watch it. Then you will see how ironic it is that you chose "Brad".

Here's a trailer/summary

It's a cult classic now. I hope you enjoy.

06.02.2020 16:52
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I'm an idiot! Yes i do know know this movie lol. I never realized it. I guess it's time I watch it again.

09.02.2020 13:43
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Hahahaha! I did think it a little odd that you missed the allusion. Perhaps it's exactly why you chose "Brad". :P

10.02.2020 09:03
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